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cap_ironman2013-06-11 04:00 am
vail-kagami.livejournal.com) wrote in cap_ironman2013-06-11 04:00 am
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Beta request
Hi. I need a beta for a big bang that is due in July. These are the story details:
Title: Undo
Universe: 616
Pairings: Steve/Tony (established), Rhodey/Tony, ends with Steve/Tony/Rhodey (sort of)
Rating: R
Warning: mental issues, self-harm, mentions of torture, canon typical violence, (assumed) temporary character death
Word count: almost 70,000
Summary: In an attempt to steal information from Tony Stark's brain, the villains of the week accidentally unlock the memories Tony lost after deleting his mind. Now he remembers everything, but it's all fresh and raw and without logical order. Worst of all, he remembers Steve dying, but has no recollection of him coming back. As a result, seeing Steve just makes everything worse, and the memories Tony has of their recent relationship make no sense and drive him crazy.
Consequently, Steve gets banned from seeing Tony until he gets better and it's Rhodey who gets to be there for his friend while Tony struggles not to fall apart. Steve, meanwhile, gets to deal with the media, who have just now learned of Captain America and Iron Man's romantic involvement. It is not something he excels at.
And then things get worse.
English isn't my native language, so I need someone to correct my grammar and find those elusive typos. I also appreciate it when plot holes are pointed out to me, or things that don't make sense.
I hope someone here can help me.
Title: Undo
Universe: 616
Pairings: Steve/Tony (established), Rhodey/Tony, ends with Steve/Tony/Rhodey (sort of)
Rating: R
Warning: mental issues, self-harm, mentions of torture, canon typical violence, (assumed) temporary character death
Word count: almost 70,000
Summary: In an attempt to steal information from Tony Stark's brain, the villains of the week accidentally unlock the memories Tony lost after deleting his mind. Now he remembers everything, but it's all fresh and raw and without logical order. Worst of all, he remembers Steve dying, but has no recollection of him coming back. As a result, seeing Steve just makes everything worse, and the memories Tony has of their recent relationship make no sense and drive him crazy.
Consequently, Steve gets banned from seeing Tony until he gets better and it's Rhodey who gets to be there for his friend while Tony struggles not to fall apart. Steve, meanwhile, gets to deal with the media, who have just now learned of Captain America and Iron Man's romantic involvement. It is not something he excels at.
And then things get worse.
English isn't my native language, so I need someone to correct my grammar and find those elusive typos. I also appreciate it when plot holes are pointed out to me, or things that don't make sense.
I hope someone here can help me.