ext_36566 ([identity profile] axolotl-lan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2008-03-21 01:29 am (UTC)

I love Harsh-verse soo much. Is this set around the extremis point? I suck at remembering timelines. Still I really like the conversation.

I know. I just… You calm me down.
o (laughter) Me? I can’t tell by the way we argue sometimes.
o That’s because I never say what I really feel.
o You say plenty. You should just stop talking all together. That’d make an interesting date. What would we talk about if not repulsor manifolds?
o Hmm.
o But everything’s ok? Need me to come down there and beat someone up for you?

That whole section was happy for me, I just loved how it read as a conversation. The realism to it, and even Steve offering to beat someone up for him. I also like that Steve picked up on the wrongness of the call and started trying to find Tony. ^__^ Yay!

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