Oh! You so rock hun! I loved your dialogue, characterizations, and pacing! Great descriptive words and over all flow. You made perfect symbolisms with Cap seeing Tony and technology as one. and Caps feelings of confusion felt trying to readjust with subtleties like stars in a movie to show the generational gap of understanding was a nice touch. Also, defining Tony's sexuality just through their first kiss, Tony truly exudes a sense of sultry seasoned experience like an electric shock. So very hot on so many levels *evil grin* Your story has made my day! Keep up the great work! ;)