ext_116807 ([identity profile] oddwildflowers.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2008-07-16 05:33 pm (UTC)

Awesome, awesome awesome! :D

I read this yesterday- or at least I think I did- but unfortunately I was too asleep to actually understand how to turn on my laptop, let alone attempting to decipher the puzzle that is the English language in its written form. (Yesterday was a bad day D:)

Today, however, is good and full of win, much like this chapter! ♥ There is so much I love about it, I'm not quite sure where to begin!

I love love the bathing scene though, and I'm delighted you had it because I was wondering if Tony had resorted to licking himself... er, that came out wrong... *coughs*

Also, the epilogue. It's clever how after writing the rest of the story from Tony's POV you switch to Steve at the end- and it turns out he's not all that clueless and also a little bit devious! XD It had me grinning like a crazy person.

Oooh, and the collar. Got to love the collar.

*Hails you* \o/

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