I really enjoyed this and the previous chapter. I'm sorry for the very late review.... In any case, better late than never, right?
All reviews are good reviews! And trust me, no review could possibly be later than my replies.
I like the idea behind this. I love how Tony convinces himself that the whole thing is his fault. I also love the different characters' perspective on it. Who believes in who.
Different characters' having different opinions on what was going on was something we really wanted to make sure we included (to avoid straying into "now everyone will be Mean To Tony and Think He Must be Guilty even though they're his friends" territory -- I mean, I know that plotline has happened in canon, but still...). So we're really glad you noticed and appreciated!
Also, it's great that Steve finally realised that Tony is Iron Man. I did like that he didn't know but, to be honest, nobody can be that clueless.
No, you're right -- much longer would have started to strain credability. Alas, the identity pr0n couldn't go on forever.
I also really loved that little scene between Pepper and Tony.
Thanks! We were trying to work some Iron Man supporting characters into this one (with Happy & Pepper), because early Iron Man is love (sadly, there wasn't room to work in Bethany Cabe).
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All reviews are good reviews! And trust me, no review could possibly be later than my replies.
I like the idea behind this. I love how Tony convinces himself that the whole thing is his fault. I also love the different characters' perspective on it. Who believes in who.
Different characters' having different opinions on what was going on was something we really wanted to make sure we included (to avoid straying into "now everyone will be Mean To Tony and Think He Must be Guilty even though they're his friends" territory -- I mean, I know that plotline has happened in canon, but still...). So we're really glad you noticed and appreciated!
Also, it's great that Steve finally realised that Tony is Iron Man. I did like that he didn't know but, to be honest, nobody can be that clueless.
No, you're right -- much longer would have started to strain credability. Alas, the identity pr0n couldn't go on forever.
I also really loved that little scene between Pepper and Tony.
Thanks! We were trying to work some Iron Man supporting characters into this one (with Happy & Pepper), because early Iron Man is love (sadly, there wasn't room to work in Bethany Cabe).