Yay, new epic-length fic from the two of you! :D :D :D
Although I saw something a bit off:
The air was filled with a thin haze of smoke, leaving the faint, uncomfortably familiar tang of ash on the back of her tongue. Several of the taller buildings in Midtown still had fires smoldering in their upper stories; the only real human activity Carol saw between the river and Central Park was a ladder truck and its crew still attempting to extinguish a high-rise fire a block away from the Daily Planet building.
The Daily Planet building? You're planning to bring in the DC cast too? ;D
In the meantime, I'm gonna be bouncing like crazy waiting for the next installments. Woe.
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Although I saw something a bit off:
The air was filled with a thin haze of smoke, leaving the faint, uncomfortably familiar tang of ash on the back of her tongue. Several of the taller buildings in Midtown still had fires smoldering in their upper stories; the only real human activity Carol saw between the river and Central Park was a ladder truck and its crew still attempting to extinguish a high-rise fire a block away from the Daily Planet building.
The Daily Planet building? You're planning to bring in the DC cast too? ;D
In the meantime, I'm gonna be bouncing like crazy waiting for the next installments. Woe.