Cap's collar _ I thought he was naked? Or do you mean his collar bone.
Right, now that aside.... It took me close to an hour to read this story, because stuff like this is easy to get wrong, to go cheap, and for the reader to feel cheated and bad for the characters being written (i can stand reading 'faceless' porn if the characters are just random and introduced for those purposes, but I can't read bad porn about characters I like and know).
But you didn't go cheap, you paced the story with a LOT more discipline than I envisioned, and your sex was a part of the narrative, and I salute you.
I need to go and drink something now, if it's even mouthwash (we don't keep liquor in the house), because Jesus Tony's naked need has broken me.
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Cap's collar _ I thought he was naked? Or do you mean his collar bone.
Right, now that aside.... It took me close to an hour to read this story, because stuff like this is easy to get wrong, to go cheap, and for the reader to feel cheated and bad for the characters being written (i can stand reading 'faceless' porn if the characters are just random and introduced for those purposes, but I can't read bad porn about characters I like and know).
But you didn't go cheap, you paced the story with a LOT more discipline than I envisioned, and your sex was a part of the narrative, and I salute you.
I need to go and drink something now, if it's even mouthwash (we don't keep liquor in the house), because Jesus Tony's naked need has broken me.