ext_121700 ([identity profile] onewayfreak.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2009-01-13 02:08 pm (UTC)

FFFFFFFF I'm such a lazy bastard. Catching up on reviews, if I can find the stories~

Nngnjdkffdkj Tony is so needy here, and it's lovely because it's so incredibly in-character, you're just reminding us of it. Tony depends on these two so much and sex is such a huge part of his life, this kind of just feels like a natural progression.

Jim's voice is amazing. I mean, you do this with all male characters you write, but especially here, I kept remembering that this is a guy, these are guy emotions, he expresses what he needs to to get the point across and the rest stays in his head. Then there's that little glimpse of what happens when he lets them loose, the kiss when he gets Tony in his lap, it's like, that's Rhodes being unguarded about Tony's unguardedness.

And Steve's possessiveness is nsajdkdsnk yeah immeasurable levels of hot. Like, this wasn't his idea, he didn't even agree to it at first, but still, obviously he's entitled to that claim, Tony is his. Rhodes needs to learn those boundaries, god damnit.

A++ would read again, have been reading again, will forever be rereading.

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