welllll you already know how i feel about this adorable thing of adorableness... BUT i want everyone to know so:
i really liked that you had steve always attracted to men and always feeling that frustration and then just finally saying FUCK THIS i'm telling him, but not REALLY telling him, just beating around the bush by spending time with him, and then it all comes out-- that was so awesome and real-life ish i think
and i liked the "and then i would tell him" fantasies that steve had-- like when he had him pinned while sparring
and i really liked how you adapted the canon scene in the beginning because that always screamed 'TONY WANTS YOU TO SPEND YOUR LIFE WITH HIM' to me :D
And tony latching onto the one happy memory of his parents! SQUEE! and Steve of course picking up on the fact that that movie was important to him! i love that too!
Tony nodded and almost yelped when Steve stopped and pulled Tony's hands into his. --- that visual image just made me giggle :3
No, Tony. I like you." He leaned in and pressed his lips against Tony's. "I really like you."--- there is a grin on my face that can never be undone! i loved that part right there! it's so cute and then tony's reaction, his moment of expression, Tony's reaction, the THING THAT STEVE HAS BEEN WAITING FOR... you can feel the build up of it. :D
and then Steve and Tony go on a date and all is right with the world. PERFECT! <3
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i really liked that you had steve always attracted to men and always feeling that frustration and then just finally saying FUCK THIS i'm telling him, but not REALLY telling him, just beating around the bush by spending time with him, and then it all comes out-- that was so awesome and real-life ish i think
and i liked the "and then i would tell him" fantasies that steve had-- like when he had him pinned while sparring
and i really liked how you adapted the canon scene in the beginning because that always screamed 'TONY WANTS YOU TO SPEND YOUR LIFE WITH HIM' to me :D
And tony latching onto the one happy memory of his parents! SQUEE! and Steve of course picking up on the fact that that movie was important to him! i love that too!
Tony nodded and almost yelped when Steve stopped and pulled Tony's hands into his. --- that visual image just made me giggle :3
No, Tony. I like you." He leaned in and pressed his lips against Tony's. "I really like you."--- there is a grin on my face that can never be undone! i loved that part right there! it's so cute and then tony's reaction, his moment of expression, Tony's reaction, the THING THAT STEVE HAS BEEN WAITING FOR... you can feel the build up of it. :D
and then Steve and Tony go on a date and all is right with the world. PERFECT! <3