ext_1177 ([identity profile] elspethdixon.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2008-12-13 11:30 pm (UTC)

Oh, wow. Wowwie wow wow! The details in this! They really show the care that went into crafting this story. The bits about the art markers and the dried out pens... such a lovely and telling detail about the state of affairs.

Thanks so much -- the art markers & dried out pens were [livejournal.com profile] seanchai's idea, I think. Were trying to put more detail and description in this fic, since we sometimes tend to skimp on it when we cowrite.

I just love the way this story is shaping up. And the world-building you've done with the aliens is fabulous. I'm now anticipating shifting alliances and whatnot with the chance for some very gray areas showing up - of the "enemy of my enemy" or "alliance of convenience" sort. So very cool.

Yay! The Argonians are kind of our pet species, now (vaguely Klingon-like, but furry! With prehensile tails! And the remnants of a decayed empire!). They represent many wasted hours arguing about what kinds of titles they should have and stealing things from Star Trek.

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