http://studyin-scarlet.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] studyin-scarlet.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2012-04-23 07:32 pm (UTC)

The repetition of "It goes like this" gives the whole piece a very Vonnegut feel, which I really liked. Was that done on purpose? That voice does a very good job of narrating the gritty reality of Tony's feelings and Tony's actions and Cap's reactions.

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