ext_18423 ([identity profile] simmysim.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2009-03-29 03:03 am (UTC)

Maybe-last-chance-sex is such a kink of mine, I'm so grateful you guys gave some detail, I was afraid this chapter would open with "WELP AFTER THAT GREAT NIGHT WINK WINK~" but fklgjafd nope, this was very satisfying. I love how pleased Tony is with himself that whole scene, his leering and half-lidded eyes, ace. I keep rereading the after scene, him in Steve's arms and finally showing his worry and fear. gakfkireklfklfdg almost worth him going back in.

Loved the Steve smacking Tony scene, it was intense.

I actually covered my mouth with my hand when Mamitu's tail was cut off. Yeesh that was an exciting fight, the action scenes in your guys's fic are always so fantastic. Her death and Isimund's response to it, it was really well done.

I am very terrified for Tony and Hank, what a time to go back to every other week posting!! Dx

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