Well, you know (I think you know) how much I love your Ultimates fic. This one was perfect. I don't know if sweet is the word I'd use. Both characters are too in character for them to be sweet.

I love that the "relationship" started because it couldn't be permanent. I love that tiny bit of hope that you managed to convey in their awkwardness at the end. Also, I happen to love Steve telling Tony that he needs to stop drinking now that he isn't going to die at any minute.