ext_2132 ([identity profile] tsukinofaerii.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2009-09-13 04:34 am (UTC)

Oh, Jan. In a way, they're all in the same boat--worrying whether someone else is alive--but for Jan and S'teve it feels different. Hank and Tony walked in knowing exactly what they were risking. It's more an immediate threat than a vague worry, and that shows beautifully. (hugs her) I love the details, with her thinking about her clothes and specifically noticing fabrics. It seems very Jan to me.

CLINT! His PoV is so... well, messed up, but in a good-to-read way. His time playing spy really worked a number on him. ;-; And then we got the Isimud/Kammani moment and that was just made of awwwh. D: I hope they get their own happy ending, and maybe the Argonians as a whole have learned a lesson.

Finally, the POV we've all been waiting for... Steeeeeeeeeeve. D: On one hand, I sort of feel sorry for Kammani. You can tell just because she's explaining herself that she's not happy with what she had to do. And then this:
"You are a warrior also. You understand. Sometimes personal honor must be sacrificed for the good of the empire."
(WINCE) That's just... (flail) We've all heard those arguments before, and then Steve nails it with the not-too-subtle reference to WWII war criminals. AND THEN TOOOOONY D: D: D: D: Omg you guys almost had me there! I can't help but wonder what Kammeni was thinking just then.

One chapter left! One! Is it next Saturday yet? (eyes the calendar)

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