I didn't really comment all along, mainly because I'm sort of shy and not really LJ savvy, but I have to say, this was an amazing story. It may be the best fanfic I've ever read. All the small nuances and details really contributed to the story and well... you can definitely see the pre-planning you had in there.

I'm so happy it sort of mostly worked out for everyone in the end (mostly - hey people died!)

I'm probably going to re-read this all in a few months again, it's just so good.

I would send you chocolate chip cookies if I knew you. This story is definitely worthy of delicious baked goods.