I was so excited to see a new chapter of this posted! I used it to re-energize for after an all-nighter, it's just that exciting :D
Your writing style is very striking. I mean, even just aesthetically, all the internal bits are arranged like lines of poetry, but the interactive dialogue bits get spaced out the way one usually expects of a typical narrative format. It makes it seem like there's something very.. fractured and strange happening with Tony internally, and I do love how his scars have affected him differently as a character (and especially how this played out when he "revealed" himself to Steve). I'm loving the slow, romantic but not especially romanticized budding relationship between Steve and Tony/Iron Man, and I'm just on the EDGE OF MY SEAT waiting to see how those two identities will get consolidated for Steve assuming that is where you're going with this.
Looking forward to the next update, and thank you for sharing your writing with us! :D
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Your writing style is very striking. I mean, even just aesthetically, all the internal bits are arranged like lines of poetry, but the interactive dialogue bits get spaced out the way one usually expects of a typical narrative format. It makes it seem like there's something very.. fractured and strange happening with Tony internally, and I do love how his scars have affected him differently as a character (and especially how this played out when he "revealed" himself to Steve). I'm loving the slow, romantic but not especially romanticized budding relationship between Steve and Tony/Iron Man, and I'm just on the EDGE OF MY SEAT waiting to see how those two identities will get consolidated for Steve assuming that is where you're going with this.
Looking forward to the next update, and thank you for sharing your writing with us! :D