I know I gave you lots of commentary already, but it's worth saying again how awesome this is. :)
Reading it all together like this makes Steve feel much more present. My earlier impression might have stemmed partly from the fact that he spent a good part of this chapter kidnapped or just not in scene.
But my inner 12-year-old is still wildly entertained by the fact that Tony kissed the Red Skull. :D If he's lucky, this will give him some villain immunity: "I am never going to Rogers' house again, because I might have to look that mechanic of his in the eyes." Sadly, this is almost certainly not how it will work, but the thought amuses me anyway.
Oh! One thing I hadn't noticed before: did you mean to spell it SHEILD? The I and the E are switched.
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Reading it all together like this makes Steve feel much more present. My earlier impression might have stemmed partly from the fact that he spent a good part of this chapter kidnapped or just not in scene.
But my inner 12-year-old is still wildly entertained by the fact that Tony kissed the Red Skull. :D If he's lucky, this will give him some villain immunity: "I am never going to Rogers' house again, because I might have to look that mechanic of his in the eyes." Sadly, this is almost certainly not how it will work, but the thought amuses me anyway.
Oh! One thing I hadn't noticed before: did you mean to spell it SHEILD? The I and the E are switched.