He felt the resistance painlessly through his ankles and calves, and it made him idly recall Tony's muttering last night about shock absorption, made him feel like he understood the engineer's point a little better.
I liked how the first half of this story worked as a Steve character piece, and then how we got to see Tony through Steve's eyes and see how well they complemented each other in the second half. The story itself had a very weekend morning feel to it.
You have some awesome details, like the shock absorption sentence, and how Steve reuses Jan's pan, and the bit about Tony wiggling his fingers like an accident-victim. And I loved how Steve felt it was too early in the morning for innuendo.
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I liked how the first half of this story worked as a Steve character piece, and then how we got to see Tony through Steve's eyes and see how well they complemented each other in the second half. The story itself had a very weekend morning feel to it.
You have some awesome details, like the shock absorption sentence, and how Steve reuses Jan's pan, and the bit about Tony wiggling his fingers like an accident-victim. And I loved how Steve felt it was too early in the morning for innuendo.
Oh, and welcome to cap_ironman!