ext_2543 ([identity profile] reticent-lass.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2011-02-16 03:27 am (UTC)

You've got a wonky capitalization going in here: "You'll have to take that up with Iron FiSt. If those are the bank robbers I think you're talking about, I think he took objection to them trying to use some kind of poison gas on Luke."

But this update is just lovely, thank you! Your prose is so good, such great texture carrying so much characterization. 'The Habits and Mannerisms of Superheroes, In & Out of Costume' would be a hell of a paper to write; I always appreciate your eye for these details because they make me think.

Poor Wanda, so awkward in the midst of distrust and fear and all these ~undercurrents~ she hasn't quite had time to parse yet. I'm not very up on Marvelverse magic users, I've got a vague idea that a few of MI:13's got mystical backgrounds but the only magic-magic user I can think of nearby is Billy Kaplan. (How canon is he and his given origin in this 'verse, if you don't mind my asking?). Aw, Danny/Luke/Jessica, lookin' out for each other. I'm glad they're working, even if only on the periphery.

Tony is someday going to figure out that when his body is telling him something's wrong, something is wrong. And on that day Steve will bake him a fucking cake. *headdesk* I laugh until I cry because my best friend is very similar. Geniuses are idiots sometimes, and it doesn't usually do their health any favors.

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