Content, mostly. I do some weird stuff with grammar sometimes, so if anything jumps out, then I'm all ears.
My main concerns: characterization, continuity, readability. I want them to all be as authentic as possible. I guess reading for the feel of it? Make sure I'm not doing crazy things. :)
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My main concerns: characterization, continuity, readability. I want them to all be as authentic as possible. I guess reading for the feel of it? Make sure I'm not doing crazy things. :)