ext_206132 ([identity profile] engel-cain.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman2013-06-02 06:01 pm

Reverse Big Bang: For No better Man

Artist: [livejournal.com profile] ashei
Author: Valeria
Universe/Rating: 616 AU slightly mature rating
Warning: this is the zombiestory before it becomes a zombiestory (so not a whole lot of zombies)
Word Count: ~29,900 words



Summary: Steve brought the band back together, but the new Avengers are still not ready to trust each other. Meanwhile, somebody feeding SHIELD false information and when Tony Stark is pointed out as an antagonist, the ball starts rolling. Steve has limited time to sort out out the Avengers, SHIELD, Tony and possibly all of New York. He also has a strong belief that there is no such thing as zombies.

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[identity profile] inukagome15.livejournal.com 2013-06-02 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Did you remove the story? I kind of noticed just as I was going to post a comment. I was going to suggest you get a beta, so I hope that's what you're doing...
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[identity profile] inukagome15.livejournal.com 2013-06-02 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
If it was the html, that might account for the errors. I was asking because there was one scene where we had the Avengers, Steve in the trailer, and then the Avengers, all without a scene break or anything else to distinguish just why the scene was changing so abruptly. There were also numerous words I couldn't read because they were so jumbled up, and various missing quotation marks that made it impossible to make out whether something was dialogue or just part of the narrative.