Thank you so, so much for the comment! Sorry it took me a bit to reply-- I am actually WITH my lovely co-writer for her birthday, and I only see her a couple of times a year.
It's actually supposed to be entirely from Steve's perspective, but the verses alternate him talking about Tony vs himself, so it alternates sciencey and non-sciencey verses.
That is actually the FIRST verse I completed and didn't edit. The first two things I wrote were a sort of alternate of the first and last verses, which got changed a TON, and that one, that I ended up moving to later in the song, but that stayed word for word the same, so I'm glad you like it!
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It's actually supposed to be entirely from Steve's perspective, but the verses alternate him talking about Tony vs himself, so it alternates sciencey and non-sciencey verses.
That is actually the FIRST verse I completed and didn't edit. The first two things I wrote were a sort of alternate of the first and last verses, which got changed a TON, and that one, that I ended up moving to later in the song, but that stayed word for word the same, so I'm glad you like it!
Thanks!!!!