Sentience: Pages 8 and 9

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

Har, this took so long. *headdesk* Srsly Steve, stop being hard to draw!!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4


First page, oh look Steve, u haz no head! I wonder why?


Cut 'n' paste, cut 'n' paste...

Steve is not impressed by your shit, Tony. Not at all.

Comments

[axolotl-lan.livejournal.com]

Aw, Steve get in on it.... I mean save him with your hot man-loving of course! I really like how you colour this the I guess he just- panel with the light scribbling glassy background is so nice. Great work!

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

Lolz. Tony should be so lucky be rescued soon. :D

Hah, I slapped so many adjustment filter on those background panels. *comic is ded*

[runenklinge.livejournal.com]

I want the first speech bubble replaced with "Honey, I´m home"*gg*

I like Steve´s trail of thought here:
"Tony?"
*silence*
"OK, tinkering again^^"

The armor really looks like a villain here

whee, more pages!
Srsly Steve, stop being hard to draw!!

And I sympathize with you, Steve just refuses to get drawn -and we know how stubborn he is

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

"Honey, I´m home"
Hee. :D Theyaresomarried. Even when they're being oblivious.

Steve prefers to be the one drawing, not the one being drawn, I guess. ;) Yes, he's damn stubborn. I've got all these action pages next. *gulps* I need references dammit!! *goes off to trawl scans_daily*

[runenklinge.livejournal.com]

Hee. :D Theyaresomarried. Even when they're being oblivious.
I second that^^

[silver-autumn.livejournal.com]

Brilliant. But I'm wondering how long it will take Steve to realize that Tony didn't just program his armour to be kinky and that it is in fact evil, and molesting him. Heh. Can't wait for the next part as usual. :)

[mneiai.livejournal.com]

Just caught up on these--they're really good. ^.^

Can't wait to see what happens in the next one haha

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :D :D

[johanirae.livejournal.com]

SAVE HIM STEVE! And have plenty of comfort!sex later XD

[kagerune.livejournal.com]

:D Sexy icon~

[kagerune.livejournal.com]

D: Ugh I totally agree, Steve is difficult to draw (have you seen my Steve? it's horrible). I have trouble with his military crop-cut.

[runenklinge.livejournal.com]

it´s always the hair, isn´t it?
I prefer to draw him with the cowl on, but he does take it off..sometimes^^

No, your Steve does not look horrible, he´s gorgeous

[tavella.livejournal.com]

Hey, he doesn't *always* wear it in a crop cut, it's longer quite often.

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

At least for Tony I can use reference pics of RDJ, but as yet, we don't know who MarvelMovie!verse Cap is yet... Plus I don't usually draw charecters with sqare jaws, so I'm not as used to it.

Steve, you're incorigable! X(

[nicpick.livejournal.com]

I don't care if you're hard to draw Steve YOU ARE VERY VERY PRETTY. Also: SAVE YOUR GOD-DAMN FUTURE BOYFRIEND AJKDSLAJFAJDK.

The narration boxes with the shield OMG. You are truly awesome, you know that? Like, along with the wonderful art, and dialogue, and the expressions on their faces (yes even the Armour's) you made the narration boxes consistent with canon.

I am so not getting over this. YOU RULE YAY.

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

Oh, I had to do the sheild! It wouldn't be right without them!

SAVE YOUR GOD-DAMN FUTURE BOYFRIEND AJKDSLAJFAJDK.
I AGREE STEVE! Listen to the fangirls, they speak sense.

[elspethdixon.livejournal.com]

Eeee! Steve! With his trenchcoat on over his costume! Fight for your boyfriend's honor, Steve!

*grins* Like nicpick, I lovelovelove the canon-style shield narration boxes. And Steve's grim expression in the last panel. Also, I swear the Armor gets more evil in every page.

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

I love those mini-shields. I'm tempted to do a joke with them... I won't say more cause that would spoil it. Maybe a one page little thing... Anyway, that's for later.

[velithya]

STEVE SAVE HIM :(

Tony's eyes are red around the edges! Nice touch :)

[tavella.livejournal.com]

Oh, dear. Steve probably thinks he's walks in on Tony having a way more intimate moment with machines than Steve is comfortable with.

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

Yeah...
Steve: Tony, I know you love your robots but this...

And, y'know, re: a precedent, I'm thinking movie!Steve in this probably found out about Iron Man's secret identity by pulling a Pepper.

Tony: This isn't the worst thing... oh wait, it kinda is. Oops.
Steve: Huhhhhhnnnn?!?!? 0_o You... Iron Man suit... what are those robot arms doing to you!?

[pandanoai.livejournal.com]

*squeak* oh i love that Steve has a trench coat on!!!! (he needs a fedora in at least one panel :O) I love the glint of his little scales too.

And as i've said before, the armor has such EMOTION! it's really amazing how evil he comes off! very good job.

Steve please save Tony! Difficult to draw fighting action scenes FTW!

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

*lols at fedora Steve*

Steve: *points dramatically* Captain America to the rescue! Well, not quite like that...

Arg, fighting... *twitches* Steve is hard enough to draw standing still!