ext_101706 ([identity profile] smilingskull.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman2008-11-09 04:44 pm
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A fic told in note form

I found a fake form-thing on a friend's LJ (which you shall see in a minute) that set off a bit of a chain reaction. The result? A three-way note battle between Pepper, Tony and Steve. Complete with letterhead and different handwriting! (by which I mean different fonts.)

In which there is talk of failing classes, dancing and restaurants. Steve/Tony, pretty much PG-13ish?. (All of Steve doodle's were drawn by me.)



The second one is the form and the last one is made to look like a piece of paper that Steve found in his pocket and then got reused at the restaurant. That'll make sense, I promise. :)



































[identity profile] neptunedream.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)
This is adorable. Great idea!
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Cute.

[identity profile] jazzypom.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I actually like Cap's writing, and the little doodles on the side of the pages. I tend to do that (*sighs at truncated art career*) myself, especially when I'm taking notes and ish is boring.

[identity profile] pandanoai.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
::flails around in happiness and then adds this to her favorite memories list::

Ok 1) I LOVE YOU

2) That declaration of romantic intent form was the shit! Your uniform reminds me of sex! (FUCKING AWESOME! :D :D )

Steve's random doodles and Tony loving his own idea to get Avengers stationary and then RUNNING OUT AND GETTING IT RIGHT AWAY--- so much love!

and poor Pepper ::giggles::

the little note at the end is sooo cute :D

THIS WAS AMAZING!!! I love it lots! <3

[personal profile] pensive 2008-11-09 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
That's hilarious -- it's like a graphic epistolary fic !
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[identity profile] kaiz.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant! I loved it :-)

[identity profile] truthiness-aura.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 10:42 pm (UTC)(link)
D'awwww...adorable. I really like your doodles on the side.
(And whereabouts can I get that "Declaration of Romantic Intent" form? If it's publicly available, that is. It's pretty awesome. :D)

[identity profile] arinan.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Here (http://www.bureauofcommunication.com/compose/romanticintent)

[identity profile] sdroid.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
<3 Amazing; made me laugh and smile :D I love this sort of thing -- the sort down-home, human side of the characters we never really see in the comics.

[identity profile] gogodgene.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm smiling like a complete dork now, thanks to this.

It was wonderful. <3

[identity profile] th3newblack.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahahha omg I loved this, especially that first form. Amazing.♥

[identity profile] empty-splendor.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 11:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Cutest ever. I really love it.

[identity profile] cellared.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Higgs Particles.

Hahahahah oh god. This is fantastic.

[identity profile] simmysim.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
THIS was so adorable and fun, aha, I really loved the fonts you got for their handwriting, esp Pepper's. That official Avengers letter head is indeed, pretty awesome.

[identity profile] honorableshadow.livejournal.com 2008-11-09 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
That was the cutest thing EVER.

<3 <3

[identity profile] hohaiyee.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
"I have a feeling that I'd end up in a studded collar on a leash by the end of the night. And Made to eat my veggies and get a proper night's rest."

Kinky indeed, but then Steve's mind made it dirtier.

That's precisely the kind of things I could see with those two. Hmmm...a star studded collar...or even better, a collar with a star pendant, think Jan would give them something like that?

[identity profile] cygna-hime.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 12:33 am (UTC)(link)
That's sickeningly adorable, and I love it. A lot. Epistulary stories are teh winsauce. (Hi, my name is Cygna and I have a mad passion for story styles that went out of fashion decades ago.) And their voices are so clear--I think it could all be in one font, and I'd still have no doubt who was writing what. ♥

[identity profile] booster-blue.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
*is dead from awesome*

[identity profile] xidiomaticlogic.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
This is so ridiculously adorable.

[identity profile] hockeyiris.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
That was all kinds of amazing. I love the banter and the notes and Pepper having to add in her own notes and everything else.

Just adorable.

And Steve's art, so cute.

Definitely adding to memories.

[identity profile] northern-star.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
That is so totally adorable! And fun, too. :D Thanks for posting, definitely cheered me up tonight. :D

[identity profile] jynx.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
*DED*

>D

I LOVE YOU.

[identity profile] seanchai.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
Teacher!Pepper! I love Steve and Tony passing notes through Pepper, and not being able to remember the name of the same restaurant, and arguing about dancing, and just generally being married.

Also, great use of epistolary format!

[identity profile] kijikun.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 04:52 am (UTC)(link)
OMG this is so adorable! *Squees*

[identity profile] triedunture.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
:D *thumbs up*

[identity profile] caduceus03.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
<3

Oh man, this was just what I needed today. ^_^ Made me smile.

Loved all the little details that people have mentioned - the combined dorkiness and smuttiness of Tony's form, the Avengers letterhead, and all the little day-to-day details like Steve's vintage poster search and the not!argument about dancing. <3 Just wonderful.

[identity profile] runenklinge.livejournal.com 2008-11-10 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
awesome!
this is perfect

[identity profile] avidlydelicious.livejournal.com 2008-11-12 10:45 am (UTC)(link)
AWESOME. Lol, I especially love Pepper's handwriting for some reason. xD
These are genius and put a HUGE grin on my face. They are such a family, hee. This is definitely going in my memories for whenever I need a ficcish pick me up. Thanks for sharing. :)

[identity profile] crimsonquills.livejournal.com 2008-11-12 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
*laughs* This was wonderful! I love the fonts you chose for all of them. And the three way banter was much fun. Pepper choosing a new restaurant for them without even asking was priceless. *g*

[identity profile] schmevil.livejournal.com 2008-11-13 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
This? Pure awesome.

[identity profile] cat-13145.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 09:08 am (UTC)(link)
LOve this. Write more like this please. Now must get on with My essay, else I will follow Tony's unhappiness (with an F)

[identity profile] tavella.livejournal.com 2009-02-08 08:15 am (UTC)(link)
I adore this. Tony's silly form! Steve's little drawings (especially the closeup of Tony on his first Avenger's letterhead note.). And Pepper snarking at them both.
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[identity profile] amarin-rose.livejournal.com 2009-08-30 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
This is great! I love the little doodles (great job on those, btw) and the letterhead, and Tony admitting that passing notes is fun. :)

[identity profile] bottledminx.livejournal.com 2011-12-19 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
Daaaawwwwwwwwwwww <3!
So adorable <3