ext_141309 ([identity profile] ethnos44.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman2008-12-11 10:44 pm
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Tony Stark : Rises again







For He will rise again.
Upon the dread plain.

He walks the road of hero.
The futurist wakes up for the day after tomorrow.
 
     
For everyting that's been said and done.
Gifts that had been crushed and burned.

He'll show iron will. 

The blood on his heart and hands.
He naver forgets, never does.
He goes on no matter what he feels.

All the demons of deadly griefs.
Inhabits, devours what's left inside.
He dies and falls deep down hard.

But he must rise.
Swallowing their despise.


The fallen king rises and becomes an iron man.


For he always has been.
That's who he is.

The broken love remains.
His devastated soul withers.
But we call him the Iron Man.


That's who he is.

For he strives to be.




I
 drew that on hoping for Tony's new start. :D
It's my first try on poetry or whatever in English....


[identity profile] johanirae.livejournal.com 2008-12-11 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
*joins you in hoping* Powerful pic hon.

[identity profile] mechanicaljewel.livejournal.com 2008-12-11 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
That's not just Tony Stark. That's Tony Motherfucking Stark.

[identity profile] mizuko060.livejournal.com 2008-12-11 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Hohohoooo....Tony's gonna kick some a$$! XD

And the poem was very touching. I'm hoping for a new start for you too, sweetie. *huggles Tony*

[identity profile] perrypadfoot.livejournal.com 2008-12-11 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Tony is totally about to kick Norman in the head. GO TONY!!!

The poem made me sad...

[identity profile] simmysim.livejournal.com 2008-12-11 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Very very nice. I like the blue tones you used, and Tony's expression is great.

[identity profile] elspethdixon.livejournal.com 2008-12-11 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the blue tones, and his determined expression, and the hair, and for some reason, I especially like his crumpled/wrinkled shirt collar.
The poem is very powerfull, too, and much better than I could ever do in a second language!

[identity profile] focsfyr.livejournal.com 2008-12-12 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Love it! Tony Stark: rumpled, battered and still totally ready to kick some ass. \o/ Go Tony!

Especially like the sharp lines with blue-tone shading. Perfect for the mood of the pic, and very nicely drawn. Loved the poem too, very strong and very fitting.