Art: Two Pictures for All That Remains, Both G

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

ETA: Thanks to the crits from hohaiyee and practical_puss I tweaked a few things on the group picture and I think it works better now. Thanks guys.


Title Family
Artist ani_bester
Rating G (both pictures are G)
Characters Tony, Steve, and Maria
Media Copic Marker
Notes Two images From kijikun's her fic "All The Remains"
One thing when I illustrate, I kinda draw what comes to mind. I'm very very bad sometimes with scene specific fic. I like the picture of all three of them though. For me, it captures the characterization and theme of the fic thus far. At least how I see it anyway. I hope it works for you Kiji ^__^



This was *very* fun to draw. I love drawing children so I had a blast with this ^__^





I loved this .. up until I was coloring and something happened t Tony's neck AGAIN. Now I still love it but maybe 10% less than I did ^^;;
I just can't draw suits. It's a failing :(
But Steve and Maria are great and TOny doens't bug me so much that I will restart it a third time, but *sigh* Sorry about his neck there Kiji.

And Tony wear a Dior suit btw. At ellry_in_ink's insistence. Which is lucky for him, because I'd been reading 80's comics AND IT SHOWED.

Comments

[lilpocketninja.livejournal.com]

PSST: html is a wee bit borked. I want to seee.

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

Oh HTML was very borked *LOL* It's fixed now.
I forgot to preview it before posting *blush*

[practical-puss.livejournal.com]

Awww. Steve looks so happy in his dorky little sweater. Maria looks... mistrustful, and Tony is just creeping me out a little. I don't know what you're talking about re: Tony's neck. Looks fine to me. The coloring is great, especially on Maria's outfit (btw, lovelovelove the braids). The only thing I'd change is the weird little pouch on her sweater. It looks like it's supposed to be a crease or pocket, but it's a little too deep.

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

The only thing I'd change is the weird little pouch on her sweater. It looks like it's supposed to be a crease or pocket, but it's a little too deep.

Oh my gosh how did I not see that. Now I can't stop looking Guh! Thank you for pointing that out though. Creepy sweater creases need to go on the list of things to watch for in the future!

So glad you like it though. And heh, I love braids like that. I think it's from watching Anne of Green Gables at an impressionable age =P

Yeah Tony is creepy . . I think Hohaiyee has a point int hat at this size, one of his pupils isn't showing up well. I think may fix that. See if it helps the creepy go away ^^

ETA: I fixed the sweater as best I could in the few minutes I had. It still pouches oddly but at least there is no bug black line drawing attention t it =P Thanks!

[practical-puss.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow, that looks much better. I just noticed that Steve's hair is doing a really cute cowlick thing. I like! Honestly, Tony isn't exactly creepy-creepy, just, "...Why are you looking at me like that?"-creepy. It's actually fairly amusing.

Oh HALP! What happened to Tony's pupils!

[hohaiyee.livejournal.com]

I like the rest of the picture, but I'm having creepy flashbacks to Marvel Zombies and the way that Tony is looking at a very suspicious looking Maria isn't helping.

Re: Oh HALP! What happened to Tony's pupils!

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

OMG! You are right. You know that is worth fixing it photoshop ASAP I think.

Glad you like it overall though. ^__^

ETA: Fixed it as best I could. and changed his eyebrows ^__^

Re: Oh HALP! What happened to Tony's pupils!

[hohaiyee.livejournal.com]

It does look much better, yay! I like how those two are exchanging A Look with the Happy Steve between them. Why he so happy?

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

awww...love the family picture.

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

Thank you *L* I think I will have to draw a better Tony at some point though. but I just kept redrawing him and redrawing him and when I botched the inking I was like ARGHH FINE.

Tony was being troublesome *shakes fist* But yeah overall I think it's sweet *L* I gripe but if I really loath art it don't go up.

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Well we all know how difficult Tony can be. ;)

[jwaneeta.livejournal.com]

Oh, very nice! Poor creepy little Maria.

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

Yes now *L* Maria I meant to be slightly creepy =P

Glad you like it ^__^
I love the dynamic between her and Tony as they both kinda figure things out.

[saphirerose1986.livejournal.com]

These are really pretty. I love the expressions in Tentative Trust.

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much ^__^
And I'm so glad the expression worked!

[kijikun.livejournal.com]

I LOVE THEM!!

*goes back to dying*

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

YAY! YOU LIKE THEM *happy dance* I'm so happy
Maria is a darling. I loved drawing her ^__^

Get well!

[pandanoai.livejournal.com]

oh these are so wonderful! :D :D :D

the second one! steve's hair! his expression! *dies of love*

the tentative hand holding between tony and maria is too precious! they really DO try, it's just difficult for them ^__^;;

::goes back to fondling steve:: his shirt! the coloring! zomg i love it xoxo

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

Hee thank you.
OH gosh I was so so happy with Steve. He's the other reason I didn't want to restart the image when I messed up Tony a bit because ZOMG SO HAPPY with Steve.
And I'm so glad I made the sweater red not blue. He looks good in red =P

And yay for the tentative hand holding working. I think it's one of the aspects I like most about the fic, just how hard Tony does try and how much Maria has to overcome. It's sweet.