Spring challenge fic, mah first fic ever :D

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

Author: northstar_rocks
Title: Spring Cleaning
Disclaimer: Marvel’s characters L
Rating: G
Notes: un-beta-ed, 199 words, for the spring arts/creative challenge



“I can’t believe you aren’t awake yet,” Tony stated as he walked into Steve’s room. “Spring cleaning, remember?”

“I remember telling you that I have nothing to clean out,” Steve replied while slowly sitting up in his bed.

“I’m sure you have something that you don’t need here,” Tony said walking over to Steve’s closet door, “ It’s not like you’re throwing it away. You’re going to be giving it to the homeless shelter.”

“Fine,” Steve sighed. Finally leaving his warm bed he headed into the bathroom. “I’ll go through my stuff, check what I don’t need.” The bathroom door closed behind him.

Tony opened the closet door and found not clothing but cardboard boxes.
“I’ll help you look through your things so it goes-“

“No!” Steve’s abrubt response startled Tony. “It’s fine I’ll do it myself,” Steve assured him from the bathroom.

A smile crossed Tony’s lips and he reached for one of the boxes. “What could Captain America not want me to find?” he said quietly to himself.
Tony opened the box to find a collection of newspaper and magazine clippings  along with pictures of himself and Steve.

“Steve, is there something you want to tell me?”





this is my first posting of any kind of fanfiction ever... be gentle  ::looks for place to hide::

Comments

[ani-bester.livejournal.com]

Awww Sentimental Steve! I love Sentimental Steve! And Tony's curiosity, heh perfect, Steve should know better than to tell imply he didn't want something looked at *LOL*

Welcome to the world of fic writing!
This is a great fandom to get your start in ^__^

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

I see steve as being quite sentimental, i see it as one of the seasons why he loves his shield so much too.
Steve should know better than to tell imply he didn't want something looked at *LOL*
Steves just so trusting, he couldn't help it <3

And thank you, i've been a long time fanfic reader, and this comm has given me the motivation to finally write and post something, I loves you all!

[truthiness-aura.livejournal.com]

D'awwwww. Sweet. :D You're off to a great start.

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

:D Thank you! it means a lot to hear read that! oh i love ur icon btw Pingpings are my favorite animals <3

[deviouslint.livejournal.com]

Heee! So cute! (Except, of course, that I want to know what happens next...)

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

Thank you!::hugs::
...Really? you want more? o_O i'm afraid that if i make another part to this, its gonna suck and i will feel like i should have left well enough alone...::conflicting thoughts and feelings now::

[deviouslint.livejournal.com]

You are welcome! I suggest giving an extension a try, and if it's not working for you, well, no one can make you finish! I just love the setup - I feel like after this there's a flustered conversation. (And hopefully kissing.)

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

oouuu i'm definitely feeling a secon part to this now... :3

OMG WTF

[theexecutioner.livejournal.com]

I need more now. I didn't know Captain America had a name and now I'm considering shipping this. MORE!!

Re: OMG WTF

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

I have brought you into the hotness that is Tony/Steve
everyone here is very awesom and there is much awesomness to be found here!
And thankies for reading hun!!!!! <333333

[skund.livejournal.com]

Hehe! Cap's out of the closet. Pun intended. :P

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

::giggle:: i love puns! thanks for reading <3

[elspethdixon.livejournal.com]

*glee So cute! I love the idea of Steve saving all those newspaper clips and other memories of himself and Tony (all secretly, in boxes, where Tony can't find out).

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

oh my gosh i got a "*glee*" i feel so proud!! ::feels very proud!::
I've found that i really like the idea of Sentimental!Steve :) For me its one of the reasons Steve is the way he is about his shield XD

[garrideb.livejournal.com]

I third the request for more! Very cute - I love how Cap's keeping the records of his friendship with Tony stored away in his closet.

[northstar-rocks.livejournal.com]

:D I'm currently trying to decide whether i want to write more of this as fluffy and sugary-sweet, or as sincere and slightly serious. I just can't make up my mind :s

Thanks for reading and for commenting, it means the world to me, seriously ::hug::

[perrypadfoot.livejournal.com]

So CUTE!