muccamukk: Wanda walking away, surrounded by towering black trees, her red cloak bright. (0)
Muccamukk ([personal profile] muccamukk) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman 2009-11-26 09:08 am (UTC)

Re: Okay, I can see that

And perhaps, he's decided to break this habit.
And good for him if he has. But there's been no lead up to that frame of mind. Not now, and not in the period of canon where he recorded that message. I don't want to say that he shouldn't grow out of unhealthy habits, just that this particular change came way, way out of left field for me.

But how is he screwing everyone over?
Sorry. I was unclear, I meant past screwing over.

I so see what you mean though, and what is basically an unconditional surrender of himself could be a very interesting, and very Tony, gesture. And if you wrote that story, I'd probably love it, but the writing on this one just bugs me. To tell you why exactly, I'd have to read it a third time, and I'm not sure I'm willing to do that.

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