ext_186231 ([identity profile] saphirerose1986.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman2011-04-26 03:10 pm

Podfic: Reconnection


Title: Reconnection
Author: Penumbren
Reader: Saphirerose1986
Rating: G
Song: He Wears A Pair of Silver Wings sung by Kay Kyser
Permission: I got permission from the blanket author permission list at Ampflication
Reader's Note: I am very new at reading podfics. This is only my second one. Also, in one part of this podfic I sing two lines. I am not a singer.
Disclaimer: I do not own the copyright for Avengers or to the song used in this podfic.

Edit: I have rerecorded this following advice from Jazzypom. I read it a lot slower and made certain to breathe between any sentences. Any more advice would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.mediafire.com/?0mn55opmtwjc6tw

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=7WBAA3OC
ext_18328: (Default)

Hey, I listened

[identity profile] jazzypom.livejournal.com 2011-04-26 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
First of all, breathe. You're rushing and crashing through the fic instead of taking your time.

You're trying to paint a picture for your reader with your voice. Use the pauses (commas, full stops) and try and have some intonation in your voice (like, when you come to a full stop whilst reading, you drop your voice, then lift your voice when starting a sentence).

The thing with the fic is, it's supposed to be intimate, in the way that the best friendships are. So slow down, feel the words, and then interpret them for your audience.

But good effort for putting yourself out there. It can be hard.

But cheers for doing it. That was my Christmas fic! (Penumbren wrote it for me) :D
ext_18328: (Default)

It's a lot better! :D

[identity profile] jazzypom.livejournal.com 2011-04-27 08:26 am (UTC)(link)
It helps that you have a naturally sweet, clear voice. I have no issues with your diction (it's really clear!), and you've made a great effort with starting and stopping.

You might want to listen to poems being read out loud as examples in how to read podfic. With poems, there's a rhythm, and it's the same thing in prose. For fullstops, there's a beat, for commas, half of that. Semi colons; a medium length pause. Or even find an ebook that you like to hear being read aloud, and ask yourself why? Once you do that, you'll know.

Create a theatre of the mind and you'll be juuussst fine.

Thanks again!
muccamukk: Wanda walking away, surrounded by towering black trees, her red cloak bright. (Happy -hugs-)

[personal profile] muccamukk 2011-04-27 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for posting this! It may be our comm's first podfic, and I've inspired me to make a tag and to dig out that old mic of mine.
ext_26950: (Tony thumbs up)

[identity profile] tonks07.livejournal.com 2011-04-27 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't listened to this yet but omgyay podfic! I've been waiting for people to start making some for this fandom! If you don't mind me asking, what program did you use to make/edit this? And did you use your computer mic or a seperate one?
penumbren: Steve & Tony looking at each other (steve/tony)

[personal profile] penumbren 2011-05-03 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
OMG! You podficced one of my stories!! And I totally missed it somehow when you posted it! I'm so sorry about that - but you just made a really crappy day SO MUCH BETTER.

XD

Off to listen, now. Thank you. :)

ETA: ...Or not. For whatever reason, I can't get MF to respond AT ALL on that page. :( Did you post it to [livejournal.com profile] amplificathon or anywhere else that I could try?
Edited 2011-05-03 00:21 (UTC)
penumbren: Steve & Tony looking at each other (steve/tony)

[personal profile] penumbren 2011-05-04 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
I love you.

XD

I would only echo jazzy's advice on the pausing/pacing. This is really not bad at all, although the "fin" at the end sounds like it's part of the last sentence. I imagine that's because of editing pieces together... I've never podficced, as I don't have the patience or somewhere quiet enough, so I'm impressed by anyone who does. :)

Would you mind terribly if I did this up as a proper podbook, with cover and formatting to show as an audiobook in iTunes?

(Also... you're podficcing Indelible? I... wow. Just... wow. Thank you so much for the HUGE compliment, because that thing's a monster. Although the sequel is going to be longer. *grin*)

ETA: Forgot to say - your singing is better than mine would be, any day. ;) And the song at the end was a nice touch. I've always loved that song, though, so I'm a bit biased.
Edited 2011-05-04 00:46 (UTC)
penumbren: Marvels magazine from Iron Man Noir (marvels)

[personal profile] penumbren 2011-05-05 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
The sequel to Indelible (commonly referred to in my journal as the Noir!sequel and in my drafts as NSD) is already 50k, as it was my NaNo project last year. It'll be undergoing serious revisions/expansion/editing and is my c_im big bang story for this summer. :) It's been fun so far, but I will be incredibly glad when it is DONE.

It's awesome that you're podficcing such a long thing. I really look forward to hearing the end result, either in pieces or as a whole. No worries about song choices; the OST I put together was more for mood than specific anything, although lots of the songs follow the general theme, and I'm sure you'll pick good stuff. Sinatra is definitely a good start. XD

[identity profile] twilight-angel.livejournal.com 2011-05-04 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Avengers podfic! \o/ You win ALL the internets! Downloading now and can't wait to listen! :D

[identity profile] ollee.livejournal.com 2011-05-04 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I haven't listened yet, but I'm so excited for podfic! I looked waaay-back-when and I was sad there wasn't any. I hope there will be plenty more so I will have awesome S/T fic to listen to on my trips.

I've attempted recording myself in the past but I do have a southern drawl that I really didn't notice until then, oh noes!
ext_72072: (Steve and Tony)

[identity profile] garrideb.livejournal.com 2011-05-09 12:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I downloaded this a couple weeks ago, but I was waiting for the right time to listen. Well, the weather was beautiful this weekend so I went on a walk and played this. I think this was the first podfic I've ever listened to, actually, and it was really cool. You chose a great story with wonderful dialogue and mood, and you captured both really well. I think it was a neat idea to play the song that Steve and Tony sing at the end of the fic!