Um, I don't know about betas, I've only been on this forum since this morning <_<. I joined to throw my fics at people. I wouldn't mind betaing your stuff, I'd say I'm a pretty good editor since I've actually had classes on it (seriously not trying to brag, because it's taken me a long time to get there). And I'm a Texas girl, so I could point out what Captain America shouldn't say ^_^ But it really was fine, the rest of the fic was too good to care. You can write tension incredibly well. I'm not usually so absorbed in stories that I forget what I was supposed to be doing. LOL, it's cool. A dragon is just a smidge cliche which was the only reason it stuck out to me. It didn't matter much, it was just the fuel to the Steve/Tony flame (pun totally intended, slap me if you want). They do handle a lot of robots too, so it was kind of nice to see something different. Also, I need to read about Hammer's apocalyptic television...