ext_2049 ([identity profile] dorcas-gustine.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman2009-02-16 11:40 am

[ fan comic ] Cap>Space Phantoms (NSFW)

Because yesterday I was bored and I had the What If? Civil War in mind, I thought I'd add a page to the story where Cap and Tony are married, having tea and keeping the space phantoms under close watch.






[identity profile] amf-wip.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 12:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Jarvis... such a bad pun...

[identity profile] amonitrate.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
hahahahaha. that is AWESOME. Oh Marvel, we barely even have to add anything to make the subtext text.

[identity profile] marinarusalka.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Bwah! I love that Cap still has one boot and one sock on.

And that scene in the What If is one of my favorite Cap/Tony married scenes ever. I didn't think anything could possibly improve it, but you managed. :-D

[identity profile] runenklinge.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
god, I didn“t spot the pun before amf pointed it out

that makes it 10 times more awesome!
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[identity profile] thisfishflies.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
But, what happened the the first teacup? And what is Cap googling? (I mean, Cap looks like he is staring at the computer. Pay attention, buddy! Tony is the one who mulit-tasks, not you!)


This is <33333. So great.
:filled with glee:
Edited 2009-02-16 15:58 (UTC)

[identity profile] ouri.livejournal.com 2009-02-17 11:31 am (UTC)(link)
I wasn't sure if he was looking at the monitor, or leaving hickeys. *grin*

[identity profile] jwaneeta.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
*Sporfle!* Didn't see that one coming.

Ahahaha see what I did thar

Funny! Thanks for posting.:)

[identity profile] silver-paired.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
See, this is why I'm glad I don't habitually drink or eat anything while I'm at the computer. Desk sex! Jarvis punnery! I approve tenfold. :D

And wow; I've only seen the last page of this before (the glad-we-worked-things-out bit) and I never knew how totally married their dialogue reads.

...

Eeeee.

[personal profile] pensive 2009-02-16 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I just love how Jarvis is unflappable when it comes to finding Tony in flagrante delicto XD
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I remember that trade. I d'awwed

[identity profile] jazzypom.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Interesting addendum to them making up. LOL.

[identity profile] jynx.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*DIES*

I love you. I officially love you~

Seamless!

[identity profile] hohaiyee.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Seamless transition!

[identity profile] perrypadfoot.livejournal.com 2009-02-17 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
Unfortunately, they just continued the fornication on the couch.

[identity profile] elspethdixon.livejournal.com 2009-02-17 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
I think spazzy-looking Hank waving his hands and protesting "But, the space phantoms!" is my favorite part *grins* that, or Jarvis's deadpan "I'm sure master Tony will come as soon as humanly possible." And I love how Tony is naked or nearly so, while Steve is still in his uniform. Did Tony ask him to leave the mask on? *grins wider*

Anyway, perfect continuation. It could totally be canon!
(Tony: "I'm glad we worked things out" *thinks* because now we can have filthy sex in the monitor room
Steve: "So am I." *smirks a little as he thiks of filthy minotor-room sex, then blushes and looks away as he realizes that Tony is thinking of the same thing*)

The only question is, who initiated the sex that we all knew ensued, and that you've just so brilliantly showed us?

[identity profile] pandanoai.livejournal.com 2009-02-17 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
*snuggles you into oblivion*

this was fantastic. JARIVS! i just... JARVIS!

and Hank being so upset about the Space Phantoms.... goodness. It was just hilarious and awesome.

you rock :D

[identity profile] snake-easing.livejournal.com 2009-02-17 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice! You are right, that first page is just oozing sub all over the text. I like what you did with that.

[identity profile] jinja-the-ninja.livejournal.com 2009-02-18 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah...i just spit my soda across the table.
Oh Jarvis....
Thats just way too funny.
Love it ^_^

[identity profile] crimsonquills.livejournal.com 2009-02-18 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
*laughs* The perfect concluding page! *g* I love the expression on Tony's face. Guh. And Cap still has the cowl on!

And that was a terrible pun. :-P *grins*

[identity profile] saphirerose1986.livejournal.com 2009-03-03 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
This is hilarious and very hot. What a weird combination. I also love Jarvis's pun.