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Reborn Issue 3 Recap
Seeing as Reborn issue 4 is due out tomorrow (gods help us all), here's your Issue 3 recap!
I apologize in advance for whatever pain is about to be inflicted upon you all.
I apologize in advance for whatever pain is about to be inflicted upon you all.
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Also, honestly, the slow and convoluted plot is no way to hook new readers. Just... we're half way through the story, and I have no real idea what's going on. I guess it's just a matter of taste, then.
Oh, I think maybe I know why it's meh-ing me to such an extent - I like active protagonists, and this seems to have very passive protagonists. Cap is literally unable to act. I got all excited when Steve left a message with Vision, because he was actually doing something! And the present-day protagonists seem very reactive, they don't seem to have much of a plan, they just respond. (I'm hoping Sharon has turned herself in as part of a Cunning Plan; in that case, I will rescind a couple of criticisms. Even if that is the case, she should have kept the others informed.)