Idle Rainbow, NC-17

[valtyr]

Title: Idle Rainbow
Universe: Marvel Adventures: Avengers
Rating: NC-17
Beta: truthiness_aura
Summary: Tony knows that worthwhile things take hard work and sacrifice. Steve's not so sure.
Word Count: 5000

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Comments

[kakow.livejournal.com]

Do you even know how to write a bad story? I mean holy crap. Every sentence you write is a symphony. From Tony's hidden uncertainties veiled as worrying about curtains to Steve's total competence at something that should be new and scary to him, you've got these characters nailed. This is what characters should be: flawed, questioning, utterly beautiful. I just, gah! I felt like I was in that room (in a totally pervy way of course because you write sexy, sexy porn). You have such a grasp of reality - this could totally happen.

I bow down.

[valtyr]

Aw, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much.

[cbccat.livejournal.com]

I'm with Kakow. Bows down. We're not worhty!

[valtyr]

Thanks very much!

[eyhjiulei.livejournal.com]

So cute! I like how Tony was so evasive and uncertain, and Steve had to reassure him again again and again...

the set-up to make everyone away is a definite kill! I love it!
And I like Tony's intention to peek on Steve on the daily mourning routines... So CUTE! So CUTE So CUTE!!
and the sex... oh... oh... Oh my god I lose my ability to say anything coherent right now.

[valtyr]

Marvel Adventures is just so adorable. <3 I'm glad you liked, thanks for commenting!