Fic: Got the Cream

[tardiscrash.livejournal.com]

Got the Cream
Wordcount: 21074
Rating: Adult
Pairing(s)/Characters: Tony Stark/Steve Rogers, Jessica Drew/Carol Danvers
Summary: No powers AU. Steve is coasting through life after leaving the army with out making any real connections to anyone around him. Until a mischievous deity turns Steve’s only friend, his cat Tony, into a human being.

Comments

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

Hee! I really quite enjoyed this, and I rarely like kid/kitten type fics.

I must agree, that Tony is very cat-like in many aspects, and I love that you kept him a genius. He remained very in character.

You did have quite a few Brit-sounding words/sayings that took me out of the story on occasion, but they weren't enough to ruin it or anything.

Lovely job on a cute trope!

[tardiscrash.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I tried to sort of work outside of what people normally do with the trope.

Did I? I'm rather bad at being American despite being born and raised here.

[tripperfunster.livejournal.com]

I've had the same problem! Too many Harry Potter fics! :D

[tardiscrash.livejournal.com]

I listen to about 4 hours of Doctor Who audios a day and have been for over a year, I end up hearing far more brit speak than american. The damage may well be irreversible.