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ext_27036 ([identity profile] mizzy2k.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] cap_ironman2012-06-01 11:04 am

FIC: I don't want you (to smile to anybody) NC-17

(I'm so nervous posting here! I know you're all lovely but this is sort of terrifying tooo. Have I done it right? /flails)

Title: I don't want you (to smile to anybody)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: PWP, angst/romance
Wordcount: 31542
Warnings: Pining, PWP. Slight RPF moment.
Author: [livejournal.com profile] mizzy2k
Notes: Slight crossover with Push, no previous knowledge necessary. 
Summary: Tony Stark doesn’t do commitment. So Steve finds it weird – but not impossible – to deal with Tony suddenly bringing home dates that look like him. Until one of Tony’s one-night-stands, who could be a double for Steve, turns out to be not quite as disposable as the rest of Tony’s conquests – and Steve’s repressed crush on Tony starts to become problematic...

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[identity profile] tresmaxwell.livejournal.com 2012-06-01 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
So I want to know where my morning went. It was early, I was going to go out and run errands, and then I opened this and now it's like one >_> I BLAME you.

It's absolutely lovely. I was literally laughing out loud at some parts, especially at the way the team interacted with each other. You wrote them so well. And the absolutely amusing play on all the Cris Evans characters, thumbs up. When they were sitting on the stairs talking about Tony doing something stupid, I'm pretty sure I was leaning towards the screen trying to shove them together with my brain. Clearly that didn't work. <3

There was a smattering of British-isms throughout that made me quirk my head when they came out of Captain America's mouth, but that's okay. Trust me, it didn't ruin it. Though I was a little curious as to why you picked a dragon? Where did it come from?! Did somebody make it? I'm over thinking this, I know.

What I really wanted to say is thank you and I loved it.