FIC: I don't want you (to smile to anybody) NC-17

[mizzy2k.livejournal.com]

(I'm so nervous posting here! I know you're all lovely but this is sort of terrifying tooo. Have I done it right? /flails)

Title: I don't want you (to smile to anybody)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: PWP, angst/romance
Wordcount: 31542
Warnings: Pining, PWP. Slight RPF moment.
Author: mizzy2k
Notes: Slight crossover with Push, no previous knowledge necessary. 
Summary: Tony Stark doesn’t do commitment. So Steve finds it weird – but not impossible – to deal with Tony suddenly bringing home dates that look like him. Until one of Tony’s one-night-stands, who could be a double for Steve, turns out to be not quite as disposable as the rest of Tony’s conquests – and Steve’s repressed crush on Tony starts to become problematic...

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Comments

[tresmaxwell.livejournal.com]

I don't criticize, at least I try not to. The only way for people to improve without feeling like they're the worst writer in the world (I've had bad critics, I've been there) is to give constructive feedback. If I think something doesn't work, I'll explain why and make suggestions for improvement. Being that it is YOUR fic, you can choose whether or not you want to take my advice.

And really, the British-isms are expected if you're British. I shudder to think of me trying to write a Sherlock fiction without throwing out more Americanisms than dialog. Maybe if I have a British character one day, you can help me make him more realistic :D

[mizzy2k.livejournal.com]

Concrit, that's what I can take. Yeah. Always forget the distinction. (There are some people who can't even take that and you have to tread on eggshells and holy awkward, batman. Wait. Is it rude to make a DC reference in a marvel comm I AM SO SORRY.)

I would be very happy to britpick anything for you. <3 ESPECIALLY if it's Sherlock. <3

[tresmaxwell.livejournal.com]

There's a huge difference. You have to be open to people trying to help you improve, but harsh criticism that doesn't have an ounce of positive feedback is hard for anyone to hear. I don't think it's rude >_> They're all superheroes. I could be wrong though. NANANAnananaNANANA, BATMAN!!!! There, I've done it too.

I adore Sherlock. I mostly read the Sherlock stories because I've been a little too shy about trying to write one. Mostly for the Americanisms. Right now my soul belongs to Marvel, but maybe later :D